Thinking out loud

Monday, November 14, 2005

The perfect moment...

As the song fades into silence...
and the evening fades into darkness...
I wish my life would freeze
in this one perfect moment
And yet life has just begun
how many more perfect evenings will come
when the wind rustles my hair
and the sun goes down
lighting the sky orange, pink and red...


  • nice one :)
    Keep writing, way to go

    By Anonymous ritesh, at 5:01 AM  

  • can see the writing between the lines, how about you tell me before I misinterpret :)

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 10:31 AM  

  • i'm not telling you anything mr/ms anonymous until you tell me who you are X(

    By Blogger Parijat, at 11:03 AM  

  • sad that you can't guess who could be reading between the lines :P:P

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 10:04 PM  

  • posted a reply n used ur comment without ur permission. At least I can take this much liberty with you :)

    By Blogger vineet, at 9:52 PM  

  • I was going through your blog today.Liked this post very much.touching.I have also experienced the same feelings at times.

    By Blogger Subin, at 7:07 AM  

  • Motu!..Simple but truly awesome. I've read poetry and i've read poetry....( show off! ;)) ...and i must say the words chosen are just perfect.

    By Anonymous Neha Gautam, at 11:19 PM  

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